Task1 Mixed chart

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MQQ5OSSQqnY&ab_channel=LilieIELTS 

 

Introduction:

The pie chart displays what one university's graduating Anthropology

students went on to do after completing their undergraduate degree,while the table illustrates

how much the anthropologists who found jobs earned after 5 years.

 

근데여기서 in work라는 표현이 있으니까.. who found jobs로 써놓는게 좋겠지 

 

Overview. 

Most significant features.

 

Overall, the majority of the graduates./ most of the graduates had full-time jobs.

In addition, while a significant proportion of the freelance consultants and government

employees earned at least $75,000, only rough half of the private sector employees did

 

Details Paragraph1

 

Just over half of the graduates went on to work full-time, compared with only 15 percent

working part-time and 12 percent unemployed. Those who did full-time postgraduate study and

those who did postgraduate study while working part-time each only made up a small minority

of the graduates, at 8 and 5 percent respectively

 

detail paragraph2  쓸모없는 데이버리고. 

Moving on to their salaries, 80 percent of the freelance consultants earned at least $ 75,000,

half of whom were in the highest salary range of more than $100,000. Although there were also 80 percent of 

the government employees making no less than $75,000, a relatively high proportion of the government employees,

at 50 percent, earned at least $100,000. In comparison, only 55 percent of those working for private companies

made a minimum of $75,000. The proportion of the freelance consultants and the government employees who were in the lowest salary bracket of $25,000 to $49,999 both stood at only 5 percent, versus 10 percent for those 

employed in the private sector.

 

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