how to answer the question do장점 outweigh disadvantages.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c_iMuGaIXd8 

 

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles

will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages

 

detail은 .자율주행, self-driving techonology. unemployment rate spike. but efficiency, more comfortable. 

labor shortage. overcome.  trucking industry. supply chain. more stable.

 

outweigh란? does the sum of the advantages carries greater weight greater importance/ than sum of the disadvantages.

 

장점:   more comfortable.

labor shortage. overcome.  efficiency. trucking industry. supply chain. more stable.

 

Trucking industry will have significant increase in efficiency by overcome labor shortage

The trucking industry will have a significant increase in efficiency by overcoming the labor shortage

 

단점: unemployment rate spike.

 

 

In tro

paraphrase어케할까. 미래에는 자동차, 버스, 트럭-> transport or vehicles. 

driverless-> self-driving, autonomous no need to drive anymore. in the future.  

opinion.

 

The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.->이건 패러프레이징하기가 좀 어렵다. 

 

In the future, all vehicles will be autonomous. Passengers will be the only people insde them.

I believe businesses could cut costs by using driverless cars, and this advantages far outweighs any potential

disadvantages.

 

 

Body1 - one disadvantages 

topic sentence: unemployment.              

explanation:

example: truckers, bus drivers, delivery couriers.

why this is unimportant: offer a solution.-> find another job. 

 

One downside of self-driving cars might be that they could lead to large unemployment(employment losses)

Nowadays, in many countries, a great number of people are making a living by driving, be they truckers, bus drivers, or delivery couriers.Imagine all these people lost their workplaces by autonomous cars.  That would raise the unemployment rates in these countries significantly.(However, I think this can be avoided if drivers reskill to get themselves a job in other industry (such as IT, Entertainment, Construction) ) ->offer a solution. 

 

weak point 

downside:단점

couriers 메세지보내는 회사, 사람들.

 

모든 예시가 for example or for instance로 시작하는건 아니다!

 

Body2 - advantage 

 

Topic sentence: Help businesses cut costs

explanation:

example: 

why this is a great advantage: find the bigger pictures.

 

 

On the positive side, driverless cars could help businesses reduce operating expenses. This is because, with these cars,they would not need to hire drivers to deliver their products or services to their customers. For instance, the American logistics company UPS currently has hundreds of thousands of truck drivers and pays them an average of 60K dollars per year, which adds up to tens of billion of dollars annually. Replacing these drivers with autonomous cars would mean that these huge salary payments could be eliminated.(I think this could create a great advantage for society as a whole because companies could devote the money they save on labor to other aspects of their business, which could mean cheaper, better goods for consumers.)

 

devote? 헌신하다? 바치다.

 

 

adds up to? 합계내다.

 

conclusion

 

opinion + main ideas.

 

In conclusion, although self-driving vehicles would result in many job losses, I believe this downside is greatly outweighed by the upside that these vehicles could help businesses save operating costs.