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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jCcfYbzqukE&t=1449s&ab_channel=BestMyTest Introduction The table provided shows information regarding annual weather conditions for Edinburgh , Paris, Helsinki and Casablanca. Overview Overall, although Paris has the most annual rain in millimeters, Helsinki has the most rainy days and by far the most snow. Helsinki and Casablanca experience much wider temperature..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MQQ5OSSQqnY&ab_channel=LilieIELTS Introduction: The pie chart displays what one university's graduating Anthropology students went on to do after completing their undergraduate degree,while the table illustrates how much the anthropologists who found jobs earned after 5 years. 근데여기서 in work라는 표현이 있으니까.. who found jobs로 써놓는게 좋겠지 Overview. Most significant features...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9r6P5eT9_S8&lc=Ugx3hJsGr3Lpoi0awKd4AaABAg.9fuyDpP2Lyn9fv9HEy0lr4&ab_channel=LilieIELTS Topic: some people believe that professionals, such as doctors, and engineers , should be required to to work in the country where did their training. 1. plan body in case your initial strategy doesn't work. 만약에 disagree 와 agree 가 상반될떄. topic sentence : career fulfillment explan..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c_iMuGaIXd8 In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages detail은 .자율주행, self-driving techonology. unemployment rate spike. but efficiency, more comfortable. labor shortage. overcome. trucking industry. s..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fik55c3185M&ab_channel=LilieIELTS 몇몇 나라는, 더많은 사람들이 그들이 살고이는 건물의 역사에 대해 관심가짐. 왜 그럴까?, HOW CAN PEOPLE 연구하냐 CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS. 여기에 이유2개, how 솔루션 1개또는 2개인데. body1에 이유2개 넣는건 좋은방법이아님 왜? 모든 패라그래프는 하나의 main topic 필요하다함. 근대 2개가되버리면안됌. 이럴경우엔 바디를 3개로늘려라. 질문이 what are the reasons 니까 2개대고. how can research니까 1개대고. why is this the case 1, what can be done about this problem ..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0JJHbByTYis&t=258s&ab_channel=LilieIELTS How to develop body paragrhaps. 스마트폰 너무 많이쓴다. why is this the case? either one or two reasons. 이유 2개대고싶으면 바디에 2개써서넣어라. 한개의 아이디어만해라. ? explanation 한포인트만해라. listing items는 좋지않다. also, moreover, furthermre 쓰지마라. introducing a new idea가아니잖아 user engagement only one point and good progression. 한포인트를 얼마나 구체적으로 설명할수있는가 collect dat..

Hardest Map Ever❗- ielts 17 test 1 writing task 1 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Bsd8quNQw8&ab_channel=LilieIELTS The map below show and industrail area in the twon of Norbition, and planned future development of the site. Group feature together and describe them in a more general way. will 쓰지마라. :All the factories will be removed in the redevelopment. will expresses a dgree of certainty The t..