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How to not report every single piece of data bar graph

호호잉 2022. 9. 4. 14:30

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B6Trl9bYyEM&ab_channel=LilieIELTS 

 

bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

 

Report less important data in just one sentence

여기서 전기라는 단어를 안쓴이유. introduction에서 썼기떄문.

 

Introduction. 

The bar graph shows the ten countries that produced and consumed the largest amounts of electricity in 2014.

 

 

1. Lead 

Chine led in both eletricity output and use

Overall, china and the United states led in both electiricy output and use.

Generation exceeded consumption in all the countries except Germany.

2. more than. China generated and used more power than any of the other countries.

 

3.Producer and consumer of electricity

China was the largest producer and consumer of electricity.

 

korea is smallest producer and consumer of electricity

 

4. Electricity-producing and consuming country

China was the biggest electricity-producing and consuming country

 

second biggest electricity producing and consuming country

 

Details paragraph 1.

at 5,398 and 5322 billion kwh ,China generated and used more power than any of the other countries,

The united states was the second-largest producer and consumer of power, at 4099 and 3866 billion kWh respectively

 

are there any differences. Russia > 1000, korea < 500, germany consumption > production.

 

Group less important data together and put them in a range:

range from _ to _ 

 

Details paragraph 2

 

Of the other eight countries, Russia was the only country whose output and consumption were over 1000 billion kwh,

at 1057 and 1038 billion kwh respectively.

In comparison. the republic of korea produced only 485.1 billion kwh and used only .-> repeating 피하려면

the corresponding figures for the republic of korea were only .. and .. making it the smallest electricity-producing and cosuming country.

 

Detials paragraph3.

In terms of Japan, India, canada, France, Brazil, and Germany, their outputs ranged from 526 to 937 billion kwh,

while their usages ranged from 455 to 857 billion kwh. It is also noteworthy that germany was the only country that used more power than it generated, at 582.5 and 526.6 respectively